Writing Story: Destroy the Dear

The Call to Adventure

 

The rain it raineth on the just

But also on the unjust fellow;

But chiefly on the just because

The unjust stole the just’s umbrella.

~ Charles Bowen, Lord Bowen

Second Stage of Story is the Call to Adventure, our C2A.  In this Stage, we writers get to be cruel.  We are going to sacrifice, as mercilessly as possible, the cherished thing.

We are going to Destroy the Dear that the protagonist clings to.

That Dear can be a person, place, thing, object, or idea.

Starting the Story

For the destruction, we already know who and what, by whose aid, why and how, and when and where. We mapped this information before we wrote the Ordinary World (OW).

Now all we need to do is write it, right?

Not quite.

We do have the bulk of our work done.  A couple of other considerations still dangle before us.

1st Look at the C2A

The protagonist is reactive in the C2A.  The contented existence of the OW is being destroyed in the C2A.  The protagonist has no control in this stage.

We can increase the angst for our primary characters when we give the protagonist a small measure of control then take it away.

The angst increases when that tiny ounce of control is protecting the dear thing.  If the protagonist protected the dear, thought it was safe while s/he went to protect some other thing (or went to confront the antagonist), and then we writers destroy the dear, the angst triples in shock value.

Airplane travel
Can we leave? Can we leave? Get outta the way!

No one likes to lose control.  Most people’s difficulties with flying arise from that loss of control.  We can control nothing on an airplane:  not boarding, not seating, not stowing our carry-ons, not our checked baggage, not encounters with our fellow travelers, not the AC or the heat, not the filtering of the air, not the cleanliness of our seats or blankets or dining tray, not take off, and not landing.  And certainly not debarking.

The protagonist’s loss of control could be emotional.  It has more impact on the audience when s/he avoids hysterics and only loses physical control (environment, safety) or intellectual ability to choose, ability to act, and ability to concentrate.

2nd of the C2A

Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs ranks our functioning levels.

Consider Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs.

On which of the five levels does the protagonist land while in the OW Stage?  Most of us operate at Esteem or Love.  These are most important.  Few people ever achieve Altruism (self-actualization).

When we destroy the dear, the protagonist will drop down to a lower rung.

Let’s Take Taken.

Taken presents a near-perfect C2A.

For the OW, the protagonist is with his daughter, his cherished dear.

We see his relationship with her, an atypical view of a father not giving his daughter the best gift.  We see his allies and his all-important “skill-set”, and we see how his attempt to control the safety of his daughter is undermined by his ex-wife.

While he manages to maintain a modicum of control, it is further undermined when he realizes his ex-wife and daughter have lied to him about the daughter’s trip:  the daughter and her friend will be in multiple cities, not just one.

All this is Ordinary World.

In the C2A, the antagonist is already in motion.  This Stage starts innocently enough with a phone call.

Then the true antagonists arrive.  First we see the danger to the friend, reported by the daughter to the protagonist.  He knows no secure place is available, so he directs his daughter to give him the evidence needed to track the abductors.

For a brief moment, we the audience are fooled that safety may occur.  Then our willful—& wanting and praying—blindness is ripped away.

Taken 2008
The cherished dear is threatened . . . Taken 2008

The protagonist’s negotiation with the abductor restores a semblance of control—but it is only a semblance.  He is thousands of miles away.  He has very little evidence to work with.  As a final affront, the antagonist crushes the daughter’s cell phone under his heel.

From the Esteem level, our protagonist drops down to Safety Concerns for his daughter.

As the story rolls, he does drop further to Survival, briefly.  By the end, he is back to Intrinsic Esteem.  The transformation needed was not his but his daughter’s and his ex-wife’s, to value what they had previously despised.

The Destruction of his Dear is never achieved (although we see several mirrors of it).  It does come so close that the audience’s adrenaline shoots up and never really drops down until the very end.

Three More Takes on Dear Destruction

Horror

Dean Koontz does the same thing in his 2005 Velocity, pitting a young woman against a twisted serial killer.  Once the C2A occurs, the reader is on a plummeting ride.

Our protagonist holds her friend’s life dear.  When she realizes the friend’s family is dead, she braves herself  to climb into the killer’s RV to save her friend.  Unfortunately, her own safety is destroyed when she is trapped.

The action-adventure genre provides the clearest reading of the 12 Stages of the Hero’s 

Persuasion, 2007: Rupert Penry Jones & Sally Hawkins at odds

Journey.  However, virtually every story follows this archetypal structure.

Satire

In Jane Austen’s Persuasion, the dear was sacrificed long before the start of the story.  It is the return of the dear that presents the C2A, as well as the obstacle that will have the re-acquisition of the dear become nearly impossible.

The loss of Captain (Lt.) Frederick Wentworth left Anne Elliott shattered.  She has rebuilt the semblance of an existence (for she is not living).  When she re-encounters Frederick, she must clutch a chair to stay upright.  Her unexpressed pain is so great even her self-absorbed sister notices Anne’s pallor before her egocentrism re-centers itself.

Tragedy

Shakespeare’s Macbeth holds the kingship as the dear thing.  To achieve it, Macbeth must sacrifice his honor and accept kin-killing and king-killing, all in Act I.  Here is something he has always wanted.  Macbeth is a better warrior than his cousin.  He knows that he has the respect of other thanes and fighters.  He saved the battle for his cousin the king.  Only a sequence of birth prevented the crown from coming to him.

Act II concerns his refusal of the C2A.  We learn the importance of Lady Macbeth in pushing her husband to commit murder.  We see her control over his physical and emotional desires.  And we see the commission of three murders, one of them “perfect”, for without Macbeth’s continued evil in Act III, no one would have had any suspicion that he had killed his cousin the king who was staying as a guest in his house.

Reap the Rewards of Destruction

We writers need to set up the emotional connection of the protagonist to the Dear in the OW.  In the C2A, we must remove the protagonist’s control and have her/him too shocked to do more than react.

Then we must hurt our darlings.  Never hesitate to the Destroy the Dear.

Our readers will thank us.

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~ M. A. Lee

Best Scene
Persuasion, 1995, with Ciaran Hinds and Amanda Root. The Preferred Version